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Thursday, December 8, 2011

Flash Fiction Friday "Trapped"

It is Flash Fiction Friday.  A picture can mean many things to many people.  Every Friday a group of people share their invidual thoughts on a picture. It must be written in 100 words, no more no less.

Here she sat, trapped again.   Tricked once more by a cunning and brutal being; imprisoned in this fake pose.  She plans her escape.  For as surely as she still breaths, she will fight to be truly free for good this time.
“What a beautiful wife I have, don’t you agree my pet?”   The Troll commented as he stroked his fingers down her cheek.   Carla couldn’t move a muscle, but a single tear squeezed from her eye to roll down her cheek.
“Delicious, my Sweet.  Your torment brings me great pleasure.” Her captor laughed as he licked the sign of her pain. 


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21 comments:

Luna Ella Aldora said...

Michelle, NICE first FFF! I love that you went sci-fi/fantasy with it! You could have a great fairy-tale story going here. :)

Bonni S. said...

Ciming from that background I try to stay detached, but the pain conveyed in this post is most definitely real. You did a fabulous job on your first FFF post! You should be proud of yourself!

Benjamin Tiberius Russell said...

Oh Yeah Ms. Michelle, you're not a FFF virgin anymore. I loved that line about licking away the sign of her pain. Hot-damn, this is very good. Welcome to the club.

Luna Ella Aldora said...

Or is it not really a mythical troll? I guess this shows how we all interpret these things differently. I see the world through a mythic lense pretty often...

yvonnenicolas said...

Nice! I like twist on this one. An imprisoned bride, forced to marry a troll. Sucks to be her. Great read.

Naomi said...

Wonderful FFF. Well done Michelle

Sara York said...

Wow, that's really good. I love it!

ERP said...

Welcome Michelle, and I must say that was awesomely deliciously sinful. Poor wife. That really sucks for her. Great job

Cassandre Dayne said...

Very nice suspense - love it

Muffy Wilson said...

So........this is your first FFF, is it? Coulda fooled me! Wonderful, suspenseful, agonizingly painful for Carla. Haven't we all been Carla a time or two? They ain't all Prince Charming. Welcome to our little group:) xo

Jade said...

poor poor woman!! Trolls are heartless aren't they??
Great post!!

Sherri Hayes said...

That was...creepy. Nice work. Excellent first FFF post. :)

Lee Brazil said...

Wow! yeah... very fairy tale horrifying in the old Grimm sense of the word!

For Your Eyes Only~Author Lani Rhea said...

Oh wow!!! That was creepy. Poor girl. I just want to burst in there and save her. Great FFF!

Katie Harper said...

Fan-freaking-tastic post! I could feel her pain. Absolutely beautiful.

GREAT JOB!!

gemma parkes said...

Creepy and inventive! Well done!

Lisa Worrall said...

Fabulous first FFF, Michelle - loved it :)

VenusBookluvr said...

Fantastic first FFF!
Love your twist, could feel her pain as if it were my own!

Author Cyril J. Michael said...

Fantastic First Flash Fiction Friday!!

Davee said...

i enjoyed your take on the FFF. i wonder, is she permanently frozen? has me intrigued. Nice job.

Lindsey said...

Whoa! What a creep. Great FFF.

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