Here she sat, trapped again. Tricked once more by a cunning and brutal being; imprisoned in this fake pose. She plans her escape. For as surely as she still breaths, she will fight to be truly free for good this time.
“What a beautiful wife I have, don’t you agree my pet?” The Troll commented as he stroked his fingers down her cheek. Carla couldn’t move a muscle, but a single tear squeezed from her eye to roll down her cheek.
“Delicious, my Sweet. Your torment brings me great pleasure.” Her captor laughed as he licked the sign of her pain.
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20 comments:
Michelle, NICE first FFF! I love that you went sci-fi/fantasy with it! You could have a great fairy-tale story going here. :)
Ciming from that background I try to stay detached, but the pain conveyed in this post is most definitely real. You did a fabulous job on your first FFF post! You should be proud of yourself!
Oh Yeah Ms. Michelle, you're not a FFF virgin anymore. I loved that line about licking away the sign of her pain. Hot-damn, this is very good. Welcome to the club.
Or is it not really a mythical troll? I guess this shows how we all interpret these things differently. I see the world through a mythic lense pretty often...
Nice! I like twist on this one. An imprisoned bride, forced to marry a troll. Sucks to be her. Great read.
Wonderful FFF. Well done Michelle
Wow, that's really good. I love it!
Welcome Michelle, and I must say that was awesomely deliciously sinful. Poor wife. That really sucks for her. Great job
Very nice suspense - love it
So........this is your first FFF, is it? Coulda fooled me! Wonderful, suspenseful, agonizingly painful for Carla. Haven't we all been Carla a time or two? They ain't all Prince Charming. Welcome to our little group:) xo
That was...creepy. Nice work. Excellent first FFF post. :)
Wow! yeah... very fairy tale horrifying in the old Grimm sense of the word!
Oh wow!!! That was creepy. Poor girl. I just want to burst in there and save her. Great FFF!
Fan-freaking-tastic post! I could feel her pain. Absolutely beautiful.
GREAT JOB!!
Creepy and inventive! Well done!
Fabulous first FFF, Michelle - loved it :)
Fantastic first FFF!
Love your twist, could feel her pain as if it were my own!
Fantastic First Flash Fiction Friday!!
i enjoyed your take on the FFF. i wonder, is she permanently frozen? has me intrigued. Nice job.
Whoa! What a creep. Great FFF.
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