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Friday, December 16, 2011

Flash Fiction Friday "The spectators"



It is Flash Fiction Friday. A picture can mean many things to many people. Every Friday a group of people share their individual thoughts on a picture. It must be written in 100 words, no more no less.



Jacob couldn’t believe the sight before him.  Poor Carla sat trapped again in a freezing spell the Troll had woven.  Jacob felt her pain grip his heart.   Turning away from the scene he noticed Josh leaning against the wall, stroking his stomach watching the macabre scene before them as if he enjoyed the situation.

“What is wrong with you man? How can you watch that?” Jacob whispered to Josh in shock.

“Why shouldn’t I? Christ man, look at her?  She is exquisite and ours to gaze upon and maybe play with too.” Josh smiled.

“Josh, you are a sick Fucker”

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Check out my fellow FFF writers and enjoy their take of the picture at Flash Fiction Friday.

  Thank you to my friends Benjamin, Katie ,Monique and the ladies of The Demon Slayers for all your help and support.
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19 comments:

  1. JadeDecember 16, 2011 at 2:04 p.m.

    that one was unexpected!! great post:

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  2. Kellie KamrynDecember 16, 2011 at 2:15 p.m.

    powerful!

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  3. AnonymousDecember 16, 2011 at 2:28 p.m.

    Yeah, that is pretty sick, and disturbingly hot at the same time. I can image him fondling her in her frozen state. Very nice post.

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  4. Bonni S.December 16, 2011 at 2:34 p.m.

    How sad. Her living through pain and anguish. I would hope the troll would get his in the end. Frozen in a state of fear from retribution. Great post.

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  5. Sancre Darling aka S.E. DarlingDecember 16, 2011 at 2:36 p.m.

    Very powerful! Even as I felt my eyes turn away, like your character, I was fascinated. I want to know what they saw. Fabulous job Michelle!

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  6. Eden ConnorDecember 16, 2011 at 2:36 p.m.

    A most unique interpretation! Nice job, Michelle ;-)

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  7. Sherry PalmerDecember 16, 2011 at 2:42 p.m.

    I guess I should have mentioned that you should check out my last week's FFF. It is the beginning or part of Carla's story. ooops.

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  8. UnknownDecember 16, 2011 at 3:03 p.m.

    Very cool Michelle. Unique and unexpected. Well done!

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  9. AnonymousDecember 16, 2011 at 3:04 p.m.

    Ooh, he is kind of messed up, huh? Great FFF! Loved it!

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  10. UnknownDecember 16, 2011 at 3:34 p.m.

    Great FFF. Loved it.

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  11. UnknownDecember 16, 2011 at 3:35 p.m.

    Great FFF. Loved it.

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  12. Benjamin T. RussellDecember 16, 2011 at 4:03 p.m.

    Very interesting said the Mr. Spock, very interesting indeed.

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  13. S.LiraDecember 16, 2011 at 4:58 p.m.

    oh powerful stuff and Im distracted by the pics on your blog. Very nice!

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  14. Luna Ella AldoraDecember 16, 2011 at 8:26 p.m.

    Bastards. So that answers my question about your troll! I hope Karma kicks that trolls ass right into a black widow's web and she enjoys that snack...or better yet...maybe Ben's "SHE" can do something evil to him. Poor Carla. :( Maybe Jacob is biding his time...

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  15. Rolling Muse in The RosesDecember 16, 2011 at 9:11 p.m.

    Mmmm wow! Love the twists. Def got me curious. ;-)

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  16. HavanDecember 16, 2011 at 10:06 p.m.

    I have to repeat Kellie...very powerful!

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  17. Naomi ShawDecember 17, 2011 at 4:41 a.m.

    Oh, you got me there! That was a real twist. Well done

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  18. Author Cyril J. MichaelDecember 18, 2011 at 6:26 p.m.

    Wow girl, that is some imagination you got. Fabulous FFF!

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  19. VenusBookluvrDecember 19, 2011 at 5:39 a.m.

    I love the direction you took. Fantastic job, so much emotion!

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